Story: Her body swayed side to side, almost like she was sleep walking, without her arms up of course. 


Sleepygirl: would have been a sexy image that way too 
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Story: “Worried you might be caught trying to sneak a hypnotized girl back to your dorm room?” she giggled. 


Sleepygirl: this tracks 
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Story: Josh visibly, audibly, and literally facepalmed. Hard enough to leave a red mark on his face for a few moments afterwards


Sleepygirl: yep, i can 100% picture this 
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Story: Josh sighed in relief and then pushed Laura gently against the wall of the elevator and stared down into her eyes. “You’re going to have to pay for that, you know?” he said as his devious grin returned. 


Sleepygirl: shivers push more of my buttons at once why don't you... 
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Story: “When we get to your room, you’re going to invite me in. It will seem like the most natural thing for you to do. Understand, Laura?” Josh asked, moving his hand along the side of Laura’s face and down her neck.
        “Yes…” she replied, staring back up into his eyes. 


Sleepygirl: yeah thats...a nice image... 
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Story: They were on Laura's floor, and of course there was another young woman sitting at an identical desk, reading a book.


Sleepygirl: almost like this is a pattern or something... 
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Story: “Evening Cheyenne!” she shouted, way louder than necessary to say hello to someone that was ten feet away


Sleepygirl: and yet completely on par for her character 
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Story:  “The security in this place is shit.”


Sleepygirl: almost like its by design :cp 

Author’s Note: the building layout and security (or lack thereof) is based on the REAL set up and security of the real dormitory that my wife and all of my female friends lived in during college. 
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Story: “You’re still under those suggestions…aren’t you Laura?”


Sleepygirl: i always end up answering yes to these in my head even when they arent aimed at me 
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Story: “Is that so?” she asked, knowing how much she was driving him nuts.


Sleepygirl: i fully believe that too 
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Story: “Oh…” she started, “thinking you can hypnotize me again…make me obey…make me do all the things that you want to do.” she said, raising an eyebrow with a slight smirk on her face, all while her glazed eyes looked up at Josh.


Sleepygirl: me reading this: this seems familiar...i've had to have been in this position before, at least once...or ten times... 
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Story: Josh leaned down to meet Laura’s gaze, eye to eye.


Sleepygirl: ok that pushed a lot more buttons than i anticipated... 
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Story: Josh pressed a finger into Laura’s forehead, cutting her off as he whispered “Back to sleep Laura!” commandingly.


Sleepygirl: that got me a bit 
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Story: Josh smiled and slid a finger under her chin to tilt her head up towards him. He took a moment to admire her soft, relaxed features before whispering “Good girl.” With that, he tilted her head all the way up and then gave it a slight push, letting her flop backwards onto the bed. 


Sleepygirl: again...buttons pushed 
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Story: Instead he simply pulled it up to expose her breasts. 


Sleepygirl: equally as sexy 
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Story: Her soft, tender mounds emerged from behind the bra and he felt her shiver as he moved his fingers around her slowly stiffening nipple


Sleepygirl: she's not the only one shivering